Ok, you need to actually work on something.
You'll be responding to this, so I'm hoping you'll at least answer my questions in an adult-like-manner.
1) How much time went into this? Be honest, the more time you put into it the better.
2) My bet is on that you're a troll, but here's the question: are you actually trying?
3) Are you mass voting to get this onto NG? I don't see how you could have gotten it on otherwise.
4) (this isn't a question) I made a submission, thus I'm not a hater.
Okay, so basically to make it better, actually have a plot, don't just slap some shit on NG because you felt like it. Spend time on it, instead of just slapping a background on an animation and calling it a completely diferent flash.