It helps to have an underlying beat or instrument that's consistent, going off of an earlier reviewer's statement that it's a bit too chaotic. When I dabbled in electronic music, I tried to keep one track going at one pace consistently and having everything else diverge from it, it helps keep everything seem like a cohesive whole. It makes a world of difference.
Another nitpick, I try to only put phaser on instruments that are less immediately noticeable, or I make the phaser effect very subtle or very lengthy so that it's not too disorienting.
All-in-all though, you've got the same chops as most electronica artists, you've just got to stick with it and keep in mind that you only get better through mind-numbing amounts of practice. Good luck with your music man, we'll all get there eventually.